βToo much pointless detailβ
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Wanted a lot more from this one than what was delivered! The plot was quite boring and unlikeable – dragging on quite a lot without much anything actually happening. There is a LOT of detail, but the detail focuses on the mundane – pointless things about her workout videos or comic strip designs rather than the things that actually could have helped to move the storyline along. Throughout – there was a need for more drama and intensity, but it just fell really flat. The narrator (January LaVoy) was fine – but there wasn’t enough emotion or surprise in her voice which at points made the story presented a little bit too robotic-like. From the description, I expected a hard-hitting thriller – but instead, was delivered a bit of a weird, dull, detailed romance story.


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